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Not As Evil As You Thought P1

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Not As Evil As You Thought~ Queen Chrysalis x Reader

-Warning, it is a female with another female, if you don't enjoy that then I wouldn't advise reading it. As well as, you are an Earth pony. Because I dunno' peoples OCs-



  "Come on it's not that far! I swear!" You were currently going up what you swore was the biggest hill of your life, and your friend was just making it worse trying to get you to do it as fast as you could. Why was she so persistent about this? 'Ugh I swear...' You though to yourself.
  As you got to the top, you sat down and threw your satchel down, glaring up at the rainbow maned pony. "Gah, why do you think I can do this, you have just flew up here and searched yourself." you said as you brushed stray (h/c) strands from your face. The reason why she didn't want to fly is because she found it would be cool to make you suffer by slowly walking up the hill. Pfft.
  
  "Aww don't be such a downer, you're fiiiine. Now lets go check it out in there."
  
  "But Rainbow... Do we really have to? I mean, it looks dark and stuff and I-"
  
  "Which makes it so much awesome! Come on ______!" She interrupted you as she pushed you up and forward. Making you stumble a bit.
  
  "Hey! Don't shove! I will do it alright.." You said as your ears went down a bit, you weren't really the bravest pony of all time but Rainbow Dash seemed she was and well, it made you want to try to feel brave too.
  
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  You and Rainbow Dash where deep inside of the cave. It was dark, moist, and seemed to have a funny smell. You tried to pay no attention to this until you felt something crawling on one of your hind legs. You screamed and Rainbow Dash ran over to you, flashing a light rapidly.
  
  "______! Are you okay, girl?!" She said and searched you. She smiled and began to laugh as she found it was a simple beetle. "Aaah haha! You were scared of a bug!? Pfft!" She just laughed harder when she saw that your (Coat color) cheeks where tinted with a bit of pink. That's when you thought you saw something. No, you DID see this. It was a dark figure, behind Rainbow Dash. It seemed very tall and menacing. You're eyes went wide and you cowered down, all four legs shaking and your tail between your hindlegs, ears pined down. Rainbow Dash cocked one eye brow. "What? Come on I know you can take more than that." You shook your head and pointed a shaky hoof behind her. Rainbow Dash turned her head and met the large figure. The shadow returned the stare as the eyes seemed to brighten and a green glow came off the big round menacing orbs.
  
  "Hello, you seemed to have fallen into my domain. Why would such small ponies be down here in a very cold and dark place like this?" The figure laughed as Rainbow Dash shined the flashlight right at her face.
  "You!" Rainbow Dash yelled as she gritted her teeth, holding the flashlight tighter between her teeth.
  
  You're eyes met with the new large pony. You're heart sank. Of course this was no pony, this was..
  
  "The changeling queen..." The thoughts in your head came alive. How could this be? Was she not destroyed?
  
  "You didn't think I would be so easily destroyed did you? Ha! I've just grown weak. I could fight another day. Besides. There are plenty more cities to go and destroy." She looked at you and smirked. "And plenty more foes to feed on."
  
  Rainbow Dash dropped the flash light, and went into a what seemed to be tough stance. She narrowed her eyes at the Queen. "Bring it you weird bug freak!"
  
  Queen Chrysalis in return simply nocked Rainbow Dash away with a hard hoof shove. Rainbow Dash flew a few feet away and shakily got back up. Rainbow knew this wouldn't be easy.
  
  Queen Chrysalis seemed to have found her was behind you and she placed her horn to your neck, causing your neck to have a small puncture, staining the soft (coat color) with a bit of blood. "If you take one step towards her, I will easily take her head off." The Queen gave a sinister grin, the sharp fangs clearly visible in the now green glow of her horn.
  
  Rainbow Dash gritted her teeth once more, her wings spread out in a threat manner. "Don't worry _____ I will get help as fast as I can!" She said as she ran the opposite way leading out of the cave. Tears ran down your face as you shook. Chrysalis laughed that dark laugh as her forked tongue came out and licked them away.
  
  "I'm going to have fun with you." The Queen hissed into your ear.
So, like, this is my first fan fic. So tell me what I need to add or whatever to make it better/ tell me any mistakes I have missed. I did not put any curse words in it this time believe it or not, hee hee, I am in a good mood. c: Which there will probably be more in the future but w/e. Tell me what you think if anyone really wants to read it/actually does read it. And tell me if you want the next part even though I will do it anyway. C: Yes yes, it's slow but I like it this way, that means more parts. AS WELL AS, Tell me if you want parts to be longer, I can totally do that. C:

Queen Chrysalis/Rainbow Dash (c) Hub/Faust.

You (c) You -For now Hehe-
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